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EDIT: Alright, I've fixed Jazz's and Danny's eyes! nowwillyouquitpokingme >.<;;

Also, I have decided what I will be doing with the Dash/Dani issue so I don't need any feedback for that anymore. Hopefully, it will satisfy everyone when ou guys finally read it :P That goes for people who like the idea to people who want it never to happen. What is it? Well, I ain't gonna say xD You'll have to read it when it comes out ;P Or ask me on aim for those who talk to me there *cough* xDDD

Also, as of a loooong convo I had with my sis last night, I have named the working title 'Yin Yang' for now. Also, she might join me in writing it. And lastly, there might already be a sequel >.<;; While I already have a big idea for Vlad, I don't think there will be any room for him in this fic. The villainous presence is already filled by someone in a completely different league than Vlad and I think it would just bring down the magnitude of this fic having Vlad's issues in there. So no Vladdeh... till the possible sequel.

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The finished product of [link]

:faint: 4. DAYS. STRAIGHT. :dead:

*SPOILERS FOR SEASON THREE IN EXPLANATION*

You have been warned!

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So, this is from an idea still in the making for a post-series DP fic. This will be Team Phantom in the fic, summer before Senior year of high school for Danny and a few others. To give some background on the pic, I'll give a little 'heads up' as to where everyone is at the beginning of the fic.

Danny: Still teen hero of the world, has been dating Sam for two years now. He's picked his grades up thanks to her and pretty much his high school life is similar to that in his Frightmare dream (though I haven't decided yet whether or not to make him quarterback of the football team... technically now he could "unfairly" use his powers since there wouldn't exactly be a rule against it yet xD > Give me your thoughts on this please! I'm open to suggestions though I'm leaning away from quarterback position.) He is also recognized as an extremely powerful ghost now, however that hasn’t made his ghost fighting any easier. Luckily with the government on his side now, the Guys in White take care of most of the unwanted crowds around ghost fights and the human ghost hunters or enthusiasts out to get him.

Sam: Dating Danny (duh), she's still her unique self. Her life sans-Danny is mostly hanging out at her favourite book store and her participation as an activist. She's relatively sour towards Tucker for his continuation of Vlad's 'out with the old and in with the new' campaign, however she tries to keep her political side away from the personal when they're simply hanging out (which is continuously less and less for other reasons...)

Tucker: Tucker has dropped out of school as he continues his career as a politician. He is slowly learning and becoming a great politician, however with an upcoming election, he's busier and busier, and he sees less and less of his old pals. However, with a buried jealousy still towards Danny (Fm reference) and an already strained friendship between the two, their friendship is heading towards dire consequences...

Jazz: Back from her first year of college, Jazz is as peppy as ever. Her brother's heroism has followed her as well to her new school, leading her to popularity amongst peers she's not used to and a little daunted by. She has a boyfriend going on almost 8 months but for the moment, she’s enjoying her life back at home and with her family.

Dani: Danielle was introduced to the Fentons shortly after PP took place. Since then, Maddie and Jack have adopted her as one of their own. While she sometimes misses being the free-roaming spirit she had been before, she’s settled into life with the Fentons and, more importantly, life in high school. She tends to stay more often than naught in ghost form as it is her original and thus most comfortable form.

Dash: After an incident with Dash attempting to help his hero, Danny, fight ghosts, Dash and Danny set aside their past history and have been working on a new friendship. With Dash as a new member of Team Phantom, Danny has been helping him become a better person, using his energy he used to put towards bullying towards ghost fighting instead. While Dash continues to try to portray his tough persona, the rest of Team Phantom get glimpses, on occasion, of his softer side.

Valerie: Finally having accepted Phantom as ‘good’ in D-S and PP, Valerie was shocked but understanding when she learned about Fenton and Phantom being the same. Ever since, she has joined up with Danny and the rest of the gang to fight ghosts, seeing the value in learning everything they knew, and the stronger ghost hunter she could be by working in a team, rather than on her own. While she still has to earn extra money for her family, she’s able to balance everything much better, allowing her to pull her grades up as well.

And there you have it! Explanations are open to change before I finalize the fic. Like I said, it’s still in the ‘ production stages’ in my mind xD;; The actual pic here is similar to a photo taken at the pier in August before Danny’s (and Sam, Val and Dash’s) senior year in high school, which is around the time I want to start the fic.

By the way, I’m gonna throw this out there because I want feedback on it. My mind has been considering introducing the pairing Danielle/Dash in the fic. But, is that just TOO weird? Would it scare people off? I’ve been considering it for a number of reasons, and I would do my very best to keep them in character. Of course, Danielle will be 14 going on 15 in the fic (since Danny estimated her at 12 in the show and I’m going by that estimation) so she will be a little more mature than she has acted in the show (yes, it’s about that time for her to start being interested in boys xD). Anyways, it comes down to this… due to a sister/sister bonding moment between her and Jazz, Dani will have a crush. Should I make it on Dash (or someone else but have Dash crush on her) or should I just have it as a completely different boy and have nothing between them altogether? Too weird or interesting enough? All opinions welcome!

Anyways, tis all. PLEASE GIVE FEEDBACK!!! This is one of the few times I will ask for general public opinions on forming a fiction and I want to hear what you guys think!

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Fic idea and pic © Fey
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WoW! i cant believe how GREAT the coloring is...even after the original sketch...

SO COOL! :+fav:

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Nice work! :D Sounds like the fic's gonna be good. But, on Dani/Dash: I'm not sure. I'd make her either single or pair Tucker/Dani, but that's just me. But, I'm sure you can probably make it work.

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This is so cool! XD
The colors are really vivid, you do a good job of making sure no one's crowded, and I love the way you incorporate the "D" onto everyone's outfits (although I had a bit of trouble finding Sam's). Good job! What exactly is the name of the fic? Once you finalize/publish, I wanna check it out. Great drawing!

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awesome! they all look jsut awesome when they are older! One thing though...Jazz's eyes seem too far apart, aside from th at the coloring is great and so is the detail. great job! :D

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I like the Dani/Dash angle. It's cute, and it would show that Dash really has matured enough to fall in love. The coloring job is AMAZING, absolutely wonderful, and I love how you incorporated the symbol onto all their outfits.

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Dani/Dash is just a big weird to me. Because, in a roundabout way, its saying that Dash was slightly attached to Danny. Anyways, looks good colored. Good job.
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Heh *sigh* I knew that interpretation would be there. What I am going to do with the fic (whether there's Dani/Dash or no) is show Dani as her completely own person. She has a distinct personality that's different from Danny's. I want to explore her character more and so I am going to be showing her apart from Danny, her own friendships, mischief and high school issues and her own fighting style as well. I hope that by the time I get to Dani/Dash (if I get to it) in the fic, readers will see her as her own individual self and won't read into the pairing that way. That's my hope anyways.

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:iconfeyphantom:
Yay! First person who likes it! :3 And thank you! The DP symbol is meant to elevate their status a little in the fic... sort of the 'Elite Team Phantom' :D

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:iconfeyphantom:
Yeah, I see that. ^^; Blame the sketch? Anyways, thanks! :D

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Thank you muchly! :3 I don't have a name for it yet though and I haven't even started writing it xD I must warn you that I'm not very quick at writing stories. But I assure you, when I do start posting it, it will be posted here at my dA account.

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